5/18/11

My Daughter's Autobiography

My fourth grader is writing her autobiography for a class assignment. And I get the job of typing it into the computer. You don't know how hard it was to keep from correcting the story! I had to type it exactly as she had written it, complete with misspelled words, very little punctuation, and incomplete sentences.

But I discovered a few jewels in this story.  Here are a few excerpts with her permission. My comments are in purple. The Kidlet's comments are in pink.

The dedication was my first surprise:

To my mom because she wrote The Gobblens Aprentic series and she taught me a lot about writing and edditing. Awww. . . .
Chapter One
My parents chose my name because if I got in trouble they could yell my full name. Too true . . .
Chapter Five
When my dad helped me do my bike he wouldn’t let me fall down but when my mom helped me she didn’t care if I fell so it helped me a lot. It wasn't that I didn't care, I did but it was time for a little tough love. Oh, yeah, right.
Chapter Eight
When I grow up I want to be a engener that invented the first flying car on bubble power that can hold a family of five. How cool is this?!  Sure do!
And last, but certainly the most touching.
Chapter Nine
If I was to go back in time and charge something from happening it would be my first dog (Katie) from getting stomic cansur and having to get put to sleep. *sniff, sniff*, ;-( Maggie's fun, but she's not Katie.
Later, Peeps!

8 comments:

  1. Thanks, Edie! I had no idea she did that until I read it.

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  2. Wow, is she her mother's daughter or what? She sounds just like you, Margaret.
    This is proof of what a great mom you are.
    Enjoy! She'll be off to college before you know it.

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  3. Awesome! You've got a great daughter!

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  4. Thanks, Suse. . . she does take after me on the sarcasm front. :-P

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  5. Thanks, Meg! I hope she'll turn out as great as your princess!

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  6. The kidlet's a doll, Margaret. Love her story!

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  7. She is special, Marilyn, but *shhh* don't let her know!

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