But I discovered a few jewels in this story. Here are a few excerpts with her permission. My comments are in purple. The Kidlet's comments are in pink.
The dedication was my first surprise:
To my mom because she wrote The Gobblens Aprentic series and she taught me a lot about writing and edditing. Awww. . . .
Chapter One
My parents chose my name because if I got in trouble they could yell my full name. Too true . . .
Chapter Five
When my dad helped me do my bike he wouldn’t let me fall down but when my mom helped me she didn’t care if I fell so it helped me a lot. It wasn't that I didn't care, I did but it was time for a little tough love. Oh, yeah, right.
Chapter Eight
When I grow up I want to be a engener that invented the first flying car on bubble power that can hold a family of five. How cool is this?! Sure do!
And last, but certainly the most touching.
Chapter Nine
If I was to go back in time and charge something from happening it would be my first dog (Katie) from getting stomic cansur and having to get put to sleep. *sniff, sniff*, ;-( Maggie's fun, but she's not Katie.
Later, Peeps!
