4/15/09

The Name of Things

It's been awhile since I've written about . . . .wait for it . . . writing.

Of course that was the whole reason for this blog in the first place. But writing exclusively about writing stuff can come over a bit stuffy and boring, so I tend to digress. . . a lot. And notice how much I like ellipses? The little dot, dot, dot thingies. They're fun, aren't they? Well, word through the publishing grapevine is that they look down on the little ellipses as lazy writing. I try to leave them out of my novels, and actually succeed sometimes, but they needed a place to play so here they are.

But today's topic isn't about ellipses--those darn things just sneak in. If I'm not careful I'll have this blog full of em-dashes--the double long hyphen thingies--uh, oh . . .

Back to the topic at hand: I have a tough time with names in my stories. I over think them, because names tell so much about a person. Readers form their first opinions when they see a character's name. If you see a name like Donna, odds are you know of a Donna(s) and have formed an opinion of what she looks like/sounds like/her personality. A reader's life experience can influence how they enjoy a story. And writers can throw in red herrings simply by giving a secondary character an unexpected name, or villain could be acting villainous because he has a simple and boring name.

I have a habit of going overboard in the opposite direction. I make my names too unusual, therefore they stand out in the stories I write. Unless you write fantasy, then you have to come up with something 'different', though the trend seems to be using apostrophes in place of vowels. Anne McCaffrey did this with her Pern stories, the dragonrider's name becomes abbreviated when he impresses a hatching dragon. There's a reason for her names, but I have no idea how she manages to keep everything straight throughout her numerous series. Sometimes characters in one series make cameo appearances in another series. ACK! I can imagine the spreadsheets and wipe boards!

*sigh* I digress. . . again. Sorry about that.

If a writer is writing a historical novel, the writer must have a name that fits the time frame of the story. There is a little wiggle room, but you don't want to yank your reader out of the story by introducing a 'Tiffany' to a Regency. Even if the name was around at that time period, I don't know and I certainly didn't check my sources so if I'm wrong--oops, it will jerk the reader from the story. Trust me, I've read some contest entries like that. Now, if it was a time travel that would be a different story.

I'm writing a middle grade novel right now and have the child's name of Rhiannon who I call Rhee (and I don't even want to get into the -rhea thing!), and the mom is Bryn. Yeah, two weird names. I did better with the males in the book, Jason and Mike. :-) But I think I'll need to change the girl's names or one of them, but I'll finish writing the story and worry about that later. If I manage to get an agent/editor who is interested, I'll do whatever they feel is best for the story. Remember, names are important to the characters, but don't drive yourself crazy about choosing the right name. In the end all that matters is that this is YOUR story.

Or am I the only one who has this problem?

Write on!

16 comments:

  1. Names are EXTREMELY important to a story and I do the same thing you do, Margaret. I'll spend days finding the perfect name. But usually for my main characters, the names come easy. But then I also do a whole character profile complete with a pic.
    I know, It's a lot of work, but I have to do that to get inside my characters head.
    So no, you're not the only one, girlie!
    Ashlynn

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  2. Good to know that I'm not alone, Ash, and I admit that it drives me crazy! I wonder if I'm intentionally self-editing and stalling my forward momentum so I don't have to face rejection over and over again. I do this with everything: names, nouns, verbs, you name it I do it. *sigh*

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  3. I obsess over names. I keep trying for the right one until it feels right to me.

    I like the names Rhianon and Bryn. I don't think they're that unusual.

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  4. Whew! I'm not totally weird! YAY! Thanks for the vote of confidence with my names, Edie! :-)

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  5. I don't like my name. Think of a new one for me, Margie. You know me well enough......

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  6. Great, just put me on the spot, will you? You know I don't work well under pressure. Hm, how about Lara, or Jill, or Amber, or Tiffany? :-) Naw, you ared most definitly NOT a Tiffany--too airheady!

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  7. Actually I named the character in my comic strip (which is essentially me) "Jill", so maybe we're on to something there. And of course the horse in the comic strip, "Mac", is actually my horse Murray (yes, "Mac & Jill", how original). To show you how much thought I did NOT put in to the other characters' names, there is a dog called Dawg and a chicken who is never referred to as anything other than "the chicken."

    I do seem to remember your issues under pressure...like the every-ten-minutes trips to the bathroom during horse shows. :)

    Are you sorry you invited me to read your blog yet???

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  8. Here's a supposedly true story.
    A mother in Lousianna was upset with her daughter's school because they weren't pronouncing her daughter's name right.
    The name? Le-a.
    The school tried pronouncing it all kind of ways. Lea. Leha. Leeah. Couldn't get it right, so finally the mother came to school.
    "It's pronounced just like it's written!" she said with a pout. "The dash isn't silent!"
    The girl's name?
    LeDASHa.

    Susan
    3twistedsisters.wordpress.com

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  9. I know that I have changed my characters names as the story progressed. I'll take days to find the right names. Then change the name later! so I think you're normal (within reason)

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  10. >>>Are you sorry you invited me to read your blog yet???
    Hm, I'd have to say the answer is. . . yes. Just kiddin' though I don't think anyone wants to hear about Margaret 'tiny tank' Golla.

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  11. LOL, Susie Q! Where do you get all your stories? And the countdown to the release of Susan's novel Blind Sight is *drum roll* TWO MORE DAYS!!

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  12. Hi Cyndi,
    Glad you could stop by and visit. Names drive me nutso. I spent an hour this afternoon trying to find the perfect 'faerie' name for the meadow where Gil is to be tested.
    --And this is a five page picture book!

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  13. Okay, I'll be the odd man out. I don't give a hoot about character names, my own or anyone else's, as long as they're appropriate (and that pretty much applies only to historicals). Of course, I've ended up writing heroes and heroines with names I don't like (but then, I've lived my whole life with a name I don't like), but as long as it works with the character, I don't care.

    Probably the biggest concern I have with naming a couple is how the names sound together (no rhyming names!) and how the heroine's first name goes with the hero's last name (in case she should happen to take his name when they marry). Some characters come with names attached -- I knew the next heroine was going to be named Masiela as soon as she popped into my head -- but usually I'll just grab a name and run with it.

    Marilyn
    3twistedsisters.wordpress.com
    writingsluts.wordpress.com

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  14. Hi Marilyn! *waving madly to her* I never knew you didn't like your name. Maybe that's the trick. If a character's name doesn't really matter then it comes easy. When I start thinking about names, I get a huge swirling black hole of nothingness--yeah, that does not work well under pressure rearing it's ugly head.

    Interesting to note, that the multi-published author of a gazillion books doesn't give a rat's patootie about names--maybe we could learn a trick from her?
    :-)

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  15. Waving back, Margaret!

    I always wanted to be Rachel or Elizabeth or Sarah -- anything but Marilyn. So many people when I was young assumed I was named for Marilyn Monroe (obviously they didn't know my mama). Maybe I subconsciously figure all my characters will dislike whatever names I give them and that's why I don't bother. LOL.

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  16. Well, I always liked Rachel. :-) As in Butler, but also it IS my kiddo's name. :-)

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