So, of course, I started a new story. Well, actually it's an old story that I'm writing from scratch. Right now, I have no idea how I would shelve this book. There's romance, but it isn't a romance. There's a shifter, but it isn't a paranormal. It has a few nasty murders, so it might be under thriller or suspense. But I'm going with the evil scientist horror-type story. And if I'm lucky, I'll toss in a few kitchen sinks and a time travel into this mess--just kidding!
Anyhoo, this is what I wrote to escape faeries, goblins, and other assorted fantasy creatures. No title yet. Shoot, I don't even know if this is Chapter One or a Prologue.
Later, Peeps!
I woke up naked.
That in itself wasn’t anything unusual, but the heavy duty metal box I was in was different.
Wind whistled through the small barred windows, driving winter’s cold even deeper into my bones as I huddled in the back corner of what I could only call a cage.
Two feet high, two feet wide and three feet long, the box definitely belonged in the cage category. I never thought I’d be thankful for being on the shrimp side of the measuring stick, but I was today. It was a snug fit. I hated to think how they would have to grease me up to get me out if I was any bigger. I supposed I’d be squealing like a pig.
How did I manage to get myself into this mess?
My head pounded like I’d been on a drinking binge . . . for days. Thinking about anything made me want to barf. My teeth were chattering so much that I bit my tongue and the metallic taste didn’t do much for my nausea.
Hell, I couldn’t even remember my name.
Freaking out right now would be bad, real bad. I had to hold it together.
First, escape. Then revenge. I would get whoever did this to me. I wrapped my arms around my knees and rocked back and forth trying to keep warm. I had to escape. But how?
The box was pretty solid-looking with nice beading on the welds.
How in the hell would I know about welding?
Studying the box confirmed there was no way out except for the door. I could fit my hand through the bars, but that wouldn’t get me anywhere. And the door was padlocked on the outside. I could hear the lock thump every time the bastard driving this truck hit a pothole.
And there were a lot of potholes.
Dust was kicked up and swirled behind the truck, coating everything. The glance I shot out the window confirmed I was in the bed of a rusty pickup truck. But that was all I could tell before trees flashed by and I almost puked on myself. The stench in this cage was bad enough that I didn’t have to add my own special contribution to the mix.
Great beginning! You go with it. You can always figure out the category later. The great thing about self-publishing is that you don't have to worry about it.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Edie!
ReplyDeleteI HATE it when that happens to me.
ReplyDeleteNow THAT's a story I want to hear, Jods! :-)
ReplyDeleteoooo I likey!! Great start!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Ash. I think I need to actually . . . what do you call it? . . . oh, yeah, p-l-o-t this story. :-)
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Meg--is it giving you ideas to start on a new story???
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